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RE: The First Kiss

in The Ink Well2 months ago

I enjoyed this story a lot. The slow build of tension, the awkward first kiss, and then the shift when she reached for his hand made it feel very real. I like how the silence between them turned into comfort rather than distance. The ending with their hands interlocked was a perfect touch, showing that sometimes imperfect moments lead to the most beautiful connections.