That's actually a tragic ending, I hope Juliet pulls through.
I am no expert dear but i think that you should work on separating your stories into paragraphs for easier comprehension.
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That's actually a tragic ending, I hope Juliet pulls through.
I am no expert dear but i think that you should work on separating your stories into paragraphs for easier comprehension.
Yeah, I hope so too.
Thanks for the advice