Writing is a challenge of credibility, and you know that to achieve that you must respect the reader's intelligence. You do it well, creating tension and maintaining it. You also provide the information that the reader doesn't handle and needs to understand your writing.
Well done, @bruno-kema
Thank you very much @gracielaacevedo, i try my best to make the words in my story as simple as possible for the easiest flow. I'm really glad you like my story😁