Beautiful and complete story, @kaerpediem . Lee's attitude exemplifies the misunderstandings that arise from pretending to think for others, without their experience. Nice imagery, believable characters, I feel like I know them. It made me long for the pool, swimming, I felt the smell of chlorine. At no time did I leave the thread you were marking. Congratulations. I liked it very much.
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Thank you so much for reading and such a wonderful comment - that you could smell the chlorine :D
Truly appreciated @gracielaacevedo