Hello, popurri! You describe very well an overwhelming situation for Magaly in the frame of her fatal experiences. You make us go with her and stay by her side.
In some paragraph the reading stops because of confusion, surely due to the translation, where we read "he" instead of "she".
When she got as close as she could, he radioed them and shouted as the rain continued to fall
What a great story!
Hello @gracielaacevedo, thank you very much for your comment. To write this story I was inspired by my sister Magaly. She was a firefighter for many years, I admire her for her courage and strength and for always being willing to help other people.
I will review the publication to correct those translation errors that I did not see, thanks for the observation. Greetings and blessings