Oh. OH! What a twist at the end π±
Sweet Trudy, you wrote her so vibrantly! You add such wonderful details to fill out your characters, I really love that π! It is sad to think that maybe the shoes wouldn't matter, maybe her mother wouldn't be so frugal, if her father were a better man. Yet, Trudy can't understand that until it almost doesn't matter anymore, she's already grown past it all. What a great story!
EDIT: I've just realized I fell into the same mistake as Ablaze. I also missed the creative nonfiction tag π€¦ββ. Well, you know what? I'm going to leave my original bit, because the fact I also thought it was a story, is an accolade of sorts, I think. That's just how dang good you are! OF COURSE Trudy is vibrant !LUV
I am sorry the bike wasn't for you, how disorienting and hard to grasp for a young one. It must have been hard to think over all the situations like that which were odd, and suddenly find perspective! I'm sure your Dad has a lot of good parts too but hiding another family sure is awful.
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My apologies, I'm only finding your lovely comment now, realising that it's too late to upvote it and that the Notification feature on Hive doesn't always work.
No need to apologize! If you never upvoted my comments again, I'd still leave them for you! hehe π€ !LUV !PIZZA
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