Oh, this was so cool. 😁 Well done. I think you could've afforded another 200-300ish words. It's kind of an unspoken rule that on-chain stories should have a word count of around 1k. But even that is not enough! On the other hand, the 1k cap also lets you practice structuring your plot, promises, and payoff.
Also as an aside, I'm just gonna assume you don't do revisions? Your work feels like it could benefit from some drafting. Lots of situations where you could cut some words or shift around some punctuation. 🙂
I hope you keep writing, you have great potential. 👊
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I share most of your sentiments friend, your points are duly noted
I appreciate you stopping by, glad you enjoyed the read :-)