I love this format so much, and you use it masterfully here. There are so many lines that make you pause and think. 🙂
I will also hazard a guess that you are taking chances here. It feels like you are trying out new stuff and seeing what sticks. Like you're sneaker shopping but in story-from. 😁 I'd say your natural way with words lends itself to this style, and you should continue sharpening this specific skill. Those are just my 2 cents though. 😇
Freedom indeed. Cheers. 🍻
I always aim to try a new format every now and then. I get bored easily lol! Thank you for your nice comment.