I really loved your tale. Tobi and Rosa’s battling against their parents and the tribe pressure being portrayed to me like they were two real people struggling was one of the best elements of your story. When Rosa got moved and Vincent was her new teacher, that moment was sad and painful for me. The reunion at the conference was heartfelt and depicted how life can turn. This narrative is quite powerful to remember love, decisions, and time. They were wonderfully and plainly told by you.