A very complex narrative, interesting nevertheless. Really creative the way you move through the different stages of William's life. Reminds me of Charles Dickens' A Christmas Carol.
In your story, we are made to see the consequences of the decision William made in order to acquire material wealth and fame. Not only did his life get ruined in the end, Aday, his love interest, also paid with her life.
However, there are inconsistencies in your use of tenses. Also, your dialogues seem to be jam-packed, thus making it somewhat difficult to grasp.