Thanks for sharing your story in The Ink Well, @ebukaeliezer19. We have some questions and some feedback for you.
You used a #non-fiction tag. But did you mean #fiction? Fictional stories are made up from your imagination. Our other tag, #creativenonfiction is for nonfiction stories. Those are stories that come from real life. So please be sure to use the tags appropriately.
The story is interesting, but you have a lot of errors. These are fixable with a tool like Grammarly, or by using Google Docs to draft your stories. The tool will point out your errors, and then you can click on them to fix them. We recommend the article, Help for the Grammatically Challenged.
You used the word "faithful" a few times. For example:
On that faithfully day, the two raced to the top of the New Foundation building, an 80 storey sky scrapper.
The two fell into silence as Micheal proceeded to sit next to his old friend as he reflect on the events of that faithful day:
The correct word is "fateful." This word is about fate and destiny, not about faith.
And the final comment is that we expect everyone who posts in The Ink Well to read and comment on at least two other stories for each one published. Thank you.