Oh my goodness! I won't say I am lost for words because I have a lot to say to you. Thank you so much for this touching feedback on my story. I really appreciate you taking the time to read it carefully and share your perspective.
I'm glad you responded so strongly to the story and the girl's journey. That was exactly my intent - to explore the harsh consequences a young woman can face for a single misstep, even one that was born out of vanity and immaturity rather than malice.
The Scarlet Letter comparison is apt, and I share your rejection of the moral judgment placed on Diane. As you point out, having a child is not the worst thing a woman can do, and yet the price she pays is so steep.
I'm also happy that you enjoyed the structure and format of the piece. Trying something new and original is always a risk, but I felt the diary format allowed me to get inside Diane's head and give her a distinct voice and personality. I'm glad it worked for you as a reader.
Thank you again for your feedback, @agmoore. It means a lot to get such an insightful response from someone with your experience and expertise. Your comments have given me a lot to think about in terms of the themes and messages I was trying to convey. I will carry this experience with me as I continue to hone my craft.