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RE: Isla Nocturne

in The Ink Well3 years ago

I love your way of narrating and describing the details. But won't the cake be inspected? I thought to myself: why put it in the cake? Surely they are going to open it before taking it to its destination. But then I thought to myself, what if it's a trap for the warden and his guards?

Nicely done 😊👍

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Oh, I so count on the cake being inspected, there's nothing in the cake that can be seen, only experienced:) I am so happy I left this one a bit open to interpretation regarding what came about from the cake and so on, the comments speculating on the scene have been just grand!

Thank you so much for the kind words!