Excellent storyline, there are a couple of scary parts in there like coming up on the night time, and Cyril, the young man at the back of the bus, telling stories of the kidnappers working the area freely didn't help your fears any lol!
Beautiful sourcing! That is perfect!
You are a wonderful storyteller @mrenglish!
This post was obtained through Dreemport .
I knew I have a trust in your eyes sir. I do appreciate your constructive critique of the post. I will make an adjustment as soon as possible.
Thank you for always coming around.
Happy New Year.
Happy New Year to you as well Mr English!!! Have a blessed year!