Thanks, and yes. Wanted to give a glimpse into his life, the connection to Mae in a line or two. Hopefully I conveyed it. This is the challenge I love about short stories. You have tell more with less.
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Thanks, and yes. Wanted to give a glimpse into his life, the connection to Mae in a line or two. Hopefully I conveyed it. This is the challenge I love about short stories. You have tell more with less.