Fun, engaging story, @bruno-kema! You've built a great character. Doris is a good leader, but human too, with realistic traits and emotions. It was fun to see another story featuring her... and I bet it won't be the last! After all, she has a terrorism situation on her hands now!
I love that the troops say "Yes Sir!" to her. That is a funny and wonderful touch.
Yeah, i wanted something different from the usual "Yes ma'am." I'm happy you find it funny and wonderful.
And yes, it certainly won't be her last.
Thank you for reading @jayna, i'm glad you enjoyed it.