This is so well done, @bruno-kema. You are mastering the art of these suspense stories! I think it's neat that some of them are connected, or have recurring characters. You are right that that stand on their own. I think that's important, as otherwise people who hadn't read the previous stories would be lost! Thanks for being a consistent contributor to the community, including supporting your fellow writers.
We have elevated you to officil "Member" status in The Ink Well. :-)
First off, thank you for the member status, i'm highly honored. And i will keep being active on this space.
And then, the only reason i'm getting better is because i have the Inkwell family always encouraging me in their comments. Another reason to pick the pen and aspire to do better.
Thank you for reading my story, i'm glad you enjoyed it.
Wonderful! I'm so glad you are enjoying being here, and that you feel it is helping you on your writing journey, @bruno-kema!