This is some very powerful writing, @bruno-kema. Well done! Your skill at building suspense is wonderful.
I'm sorry to hear that the story is inspired by real life events and truths. People do lose their lives due to negligence, poor training and lack of motivation. I hope things change!
I hope things change too, and quickly as well.
The earlier the better for us all. Meanwhile, we keep staying safe.
Thank you for reading @jayna, i'm glad you like the story.