Very clever story, @bruno-kema. I was wondering the boy's age at first. You did a great job of conveying that through subtle details. The story resonates, as we can all remember those childhood days of reward and punishment, and learning what we can get away with! There's one word I was wondering about — the word "football." Maybe you intended "footfall"?
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Hello @jayna, thank you very much. Our childhood days are really memorable.
And thanks for the typo detection. I've corrected it.😁