I love this story, @deraaa. I absolutely love it. You are a master of dialog. And this story flows so wonderfully. I laughed out loud several times (like the crotch thing - ha ha). That horrible moment when Tomrys has the earth crumble beneath her and she disappears below is terrifying! And the scene is so well written!
You have some great descriptions too...
She has smooth, long silky hair while I'm left with a tangled barbwire that seems to enjoy punishing me. I wear large, thick lensed glasses because of poor eyesight, but she's just perfect with those sea greens.
Well done!
This is why i always look forward to writing in Inkwell. Comments like this are just invigorating. I really appreciate that you took your time reading it. Thank you so much for your Lovely comment. I'm really grateful 😩