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RE: HOLD ON WITH ME.

in The Ink Well4 years ago

Beautifully written story, @deraaa. But oh wow, I really wanted to know what delayed him to the point that he almost missed his own wedding, and it was nearly called off!

I like what you did with the character development and drama with the secondary characters. There's a lot going on in that group of friends. Great work!

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Yes. Actually, I have been trying to get on with it about getting the "arc" thing. Something tells me I didn't do it in this story. Did I?

About knowing, lol. I guess we'd never know but I was thinking of fitting this scene in my book and maybe talk more about it.