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RE: Today Is Tomorrow

in The Ink Well4 years ago

This is so good, @doubleworld. I've never known how anyone can create a tale where the same thing happens over and over and make it interesting. (Evidently there are several time loop novels sort of like Groundhog Day.) But you certainly did it! I was completely captivated and entertained from the beginning to the end.

There are a couple of places where I laughed out loud. The first was when he says "Stay away from me kid" to the neighbor boy. The second was the taxi:

"Hello young Mister, what is your destination, I would..."
"Just shut up and drive, nobody wants to hear your best in the nation nonsense."

And I also laughed when he tells off the coffee shop for calling people handsome. You have a great sense of humor!