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RE: LOVE & FEAR

in The Ink Well2 years ago

You had me at the opening line, @egboncass. It made me smile. And there are several great gems in this story.

“Pregnant” she whispered
“With like a baby???” He asked his mind spiraling as the gravity of her words hit him like a ton of bricks.

That made me laugh out loud, even though it's kind of a serious topic. Finding out you're expecting before it's in the plans can really be life altering! But I liked out he handled it. Really enjoyable story!

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Thank you very much @jayna, it's always an honor to have you read and share your thoughts on my stories.