I like the creepy factor in your story, @emeka002. I just wish something happened in the forest. As readers, we get set up to believe something interesting, humorous or scary will happen. If a dancing clown ghost suddenly showed up, it would really make this story, and boy would Max be surprised, since he made it up!
Thank you for the review...
But i want to ask why my posts in @theinkwell don't get curated these days, did i do anything wrong or break any rules.
I'm asking because it's discouraging to write a post and not get curated..