This is quite an imaginative story, @gabmr! You really packed a lot of action in. Thanks for submitting to The Ink Well's fiction contest.
One thing I wanted to mention is that it's really important not to pull images from just anywhere you find them on the Internet. Most images are copyright protected. So please be sure to use images under creative commons licenses, like Pixabay, Pexels, Unsplash and Wikimedia Commons.
Hello, @jayna. I'm so pleased you took my story like that. Thank YOU for giving us such a great chance to do one thing we love.
About images: I was totally unaware of it, sorry. Next time will be different. Thanks for warning me.