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RE: A SMALL WORLD

in The Ink Well4 years ago

This is a delightful story of good will, and how kindness tends to be returned to us. Nicely done!

One tip I have for you, to help you on your writing journey, is to always re-read your writing carefully again before posting to look for errors. There were few times where you referred to Chike as Choke instead.

Good luck and keep writing!

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Thanks for reading.

And thanks again for the tip, I'll put it to good use