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RE: In another body

in The Ink Well3 years ago

This story took my breath away, @joseph1956. It is very difficult to write from the perspective of one who is confused and losing his faculties. But you did so beautifully. Your character's beliefs and conclusions based on what he can understand and what he has forgotten are really astounding. The story is poignant and believable and quite heartbreaking.