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RE: Theinkwell fiction challenge | The tragedy of the Santa Cruz ferry

in The Ink Well4 years ago

This is a riveting story, @marcybetancourt. I can see why you had to tell it from an omniscient point of view, because there are no survivors except the baby who could tell the story. I actually Googled this to see if it was real because it sounded like something that may have happened - a testimonial to your storytelling abilities. It is certainly a relevant story for out time!

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 4 years ago  

Thanks @jayna. It's a fictional story. We obviously have literary references from many readings. There will always be some archetype.
Possibly a long story for Hive readers. But creating the atmosphere requires convincing descriptions. Thank you for your reading and appreciation.