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RE: Theinkwell writing challenge | The princess in the window

in The Ink Well4 years ago

This is such a sweet story, @marcybetancourt. The writing is beautiful, and you did a great job of describing Celestine's world in a sensitive and intriguing way. I love her sense of adventure, and yet it's Frank's invitation that really brings her out of her shell.

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 4 years ago  

Thanks @jayna for the feedback.
I imagined a young girl, rebellious and very sensitive.
Frank was the one who "touched" her spirit. She decided to "open" her window.