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RE: Hypno (Unlikely Hero?)

in The Ink Well4 years ago

What an intriguing story, @mosin-nagant. I was a bit confused at the end, but I think I've figured it out. Because the tramp had followed him to bring him his wallet, and made so many promises, I just couldn't believe that he was the one to blame. So then when the guy at the hotel started talking about signing a contract and getting his money back, I figured out that he must have done it for some corporate reason. So the tramp is the unlikely hero, correct?

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@jayna , thank you for providing a different analysis of the story "Hypno" above. I am pleased. That's right, you have foresight about that. I'm happy, even though basically, my story is less successful in developing the reader's point of view.