What a lively story, @mosin-nagant! I love the dialog. It flows so well and really helps to bring your characters to life!
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What a lively story, @mosin-nagant! I love the dialog. It flows so well and really helps to bring your characters to life!
Oh thanks @jayna. Thank you for reading and giving praise behind mistakes such as the use of pronouns in the short story. Respect.