What a beautiful and touching story, @mrnightmare.net. It gave me something to think about today - a reminder that life is precious and since none of us know how long we will be here, it is important to enjoy each day as if it is our last one. Well done! I really liked Kirk's attitude and acceptance, as well as all of his observations of the people and life around him.
Thanks, this kind of story is not good nor bad in my opinion. I wrote it only to have a cool mind or just letting the happenings to flow without stopping.
That's a great writing technique, @mrnightmare.net. It is one of the best ways to get stories drafted, as it prevents our internal editor from getting in the way of the flow of writing.