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RE: Camila's Crystals (A short Fiction Based on #114 Inkwell Prompt)

in The Ink Well2 years ago

This story gripped me, @poemsofasickmind. The scene with Bella giving her Camila ginger candy almost made me shout out loud, "No! Don't take it!" It's sad that Justin ended up with Bella. I imagine it won't last, since Justin will finally Bella is not a good person. and somehow Justin and Camila will end up together.

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I was hoping Justin and Camila end up together too, but then I saw they are not suited to be together. They both need to learn some lessons in order for them to be together.
Thanks for your comment. It was nice to read it.