The frustration of the wife is understandable in a way. She has a lot of pressure on her from every angle. And it is very difficult for many families to make ends meet. It's tragic what happens to the husband. But it is hard to believe that she laughs in the end!
I have a tip for you for formatting your story content. You use quotes in a rather unconventional way. It would be better to put them around the dialog. (And there is no need to put symbols in your story.)
Here is an example, where instead of putting quotes around the things your characters say, you put them around an idea:
Darling, I am doing everything to get money 💲 and whatever I realise will be used to cater for you and my children first, thereafter, if I get another money it will be used to settle your family.
"Madam Goriola furious"
What do you mean? So you want to put me to shame before my parents. I will not take this from you. I will buy turkey 🦃, grand nut oil, and other things they will use to prepare food during the Christmas celebration.
Instead you should write this section like this:
"Darling, I am doing everything to get money and whatever I realise will be used to cater for you and my children first. Thereafter, if I get more money, it iwll be used to settle your family."
Madam Goriola was furious.
"What do you mean? So you want to put me to shame before my parents? I will not take this from you. I will buy turkey, grand nut oil, and other things they will use to prepare food during the Christmas celebration.
I hope this helps! Keep writing!
Thank you for your observations and I will work on it. You are my mentor. God will continue to be with you.
Best regards,