Nice character development and dialog, @ricardo993. I like the two brothers, and the fact that they are so powerful and so old but they are still essentially kids. It's a really interesting story line! And you did well with combining action, dialog and narrative! I'll watch for the rest of the story. (Note: Please try to publish on complete short stories, as mentioned in the community description. Thank you!)
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Let's say it was an experiment. The story is an old one, I think I wrote it when I started in Steemit, but I never published it.
As I saw that it fit the prompts I decided to read it, but I saw that it was too long. So while I was correcting the details I decided to cut it up to that part.
Thank you very much for reading it.