What do I know, it's often frustrating when you want to get some pieces out but it just don't work out really, this one was like spitting fire lol occasionally do try to get more angry, it could spur you on more. As for me I write better when I'm saddest I don't know why however I do believe we have different things that brings out the creativity.
In essence I feel those rhymes and the carefully selected words that went with them was a high point by all means.
Your favourite part was great I however felt my favourite part was like the apex.
Beautiful piece again wow
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