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RE: theinkwell poetry challenge | Week 3 - All Writers Welcome

in The Ink Well4 years ago

When I try to comment from peakd.com, I can't; so I take the abuse of placing my comment here:

Your text is full of a lot of reflective force about beauty, distancing you from that conception that reduces it to appearance, and propitiating an encounter with its real meaning, which I see in the verses: "you will feel hurt /
until your soul will be filled with dirt." Greetings, @rokhani.

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