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RE: The Ink Well Weekly Fiction Prompt #3: Beauty With a Twist/ Quetta and Daniel

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Hello @gracielaacevedo I liked your story of friendship that lasts through the years. The simple pleasure of being in each other's company is nicely portrayed in a somber tone. I feel as though they both know that their relationship is not ordinary.

In their eyes, their relationship is seen as a thing of beauty. Maybe not so much in the other people's feelings.

When the other person in their lives calls them, it should be as natural as reporting an outing with a friend of the same sex. When two people have to be untruthful or defend a relationship, then all is not well. Can it truly be enjoyed otherwise?

I enjoyed reading your story. It was at first for me a personal relationship, then disclosed a possible mid-day clandestine affair, to the final reveal of a long-lasting friendship.

Have a good week ahead.

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Thanks for visiting, reading and putting yourself in the place of the characters, dear @justclickindiva