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RE: On the road to the future, missing home

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Hello @pipokur67 I knew from the beginning of your story your character's countenance was such that he possessed an unspoken love for his country, his home no matter the condition, and his parents.

For any child growing to adulthood that has never left the bosom of comforting surroundings, the world no matter how near or far, can be a scary place. Even if that place offers new hopes and dreams. However, one may have read and been prepared for the next step and koww what to expect with more learning.

I liked your character's simple life and view of the immediate world around him. His yearnings from hearsay tempted him to the point of trying it at least once.

Thanks for sharing your story.

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Thank you for commenting @justclickindiva, I'm glad you like my story. Yes, indeed my character takes place in a simple but hard working environment, he undertook a journey to his new home. While still missing the warmth of his place of origin.

Thank you @justclickindiva for your engagement with this author.