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RE: The Ink Well Contest: Week One Draft || Nobody Puts Jonny Castle In The Corner

in The Ink Well3 years ago (edited)

from his mother's Hollywood crush all the way to the final crush ... impressive!

This is like those one live reviews and I love it :D

I saw the beginning as presenting the man he was, raised by a mother who left him to his own devices, his curiosity about his name that matched this performer making his mum giggle and started off his interest in journalism only to have it kill him off....
But I guess too much in a short story...

Thank you so very much for the feedback :D