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RE: War Bicycle / Bicicleta de Guerra

in The Ink Well5 months ago

A truly beautiful story. Everyone's story on this prompt focused on using the bicycle as an inanimate object but you on the other told a story from the point of view of the bicycle, that was quite a unique experience for me.

A bicycle that killed the rider out of spite, nobody could bother to seek justice since it isn't living in the first place, it will just be marked as an accident

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Hello, Happy day. Thank you very much for that lovely appreciation.

This kind of stories, are of that kind that one feels very comfortable writing them, of course the end can be something good and bad, because that object that is supposed to have been created to give happiness and transport people, became an emissary of death, although with much regret, that usually happens in times of war.

In the end, although I wrote that he was executed. It could be understood as if it was his own sense of guilt that was executing her. For the same reason you comment, who would execute a bicycle?

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