ENERGY REFILL CONTEST -Round 09 [ENG-ESP] || LIFE/VIDA

in The Ink Well3 years ago (edited)

This is my second entrance into the energy refill contest and the phrase world for round 9 is "Learn from the mistakes of others. You won't live long enough to make them all." Enjoy what I wrote in relation to the phrase.

Esta es mi segunda entrada al concurso de recarga de energía y la frase mundo para la ronda 9 es "Aprende de los errores de los demás. No vivirás lo suficiente para cometerlos todos". Disfruta lo que escribí en relación a la frase.

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life

Life they say is short
Learning is a secret to living longer
When we stop learning we stop living
That's why learning never ends


In this journey of life
Learning from the mistake of others
Would make crossing life hurdles faster
As experience is termed the best teacher

To go far in life
Lessons learned from others is priceless
As it gives one an edge of what to expect
And how to navigate at every turn.

To become successful
The successful people should be learnt from
But to remain successful
Learn from those who failed

From Failures of others
We learn a great deal from it
Not only does it prep us for tomorrow
But also an insight of what the worst could be

A lifetime experience
Could be harnessed in minutes
Although the luxury of a lifetime
Is unattainable by any man

So make use of the moment you got
Put all lessons learnt in one
To be your best self
So has to leave the world, fulfilled



vida

La vida dicen que es corta
Aprender es un secreto para vivir más
Cuando dejamos de aprender dejamos de vivir
Por eso el aprendizaje nunca termina


En este viaje de la vida
Aprendiendo del error ajeno
Haría que cruzar los obstáculos de la vida sea más rápido
Como la experiencia se denomina el mejor maestro

Para llegar lejos en la vida
Las lecciones aprendidas de otros no tienen precio
Ya que le da a uno una ventaja de lo que puede esperar
Y cómo navegar a cada paso.

Para tener éxito
Las personas exitosas deben aprender de
Pero para seguir siendo exitoso
Aprende de los que fallaron

De los fracasos de otros
Aprendemos mucho de eso
No solo nos prepara para el mañana
Pero también una idea de lo que podría ser lo peor

Una experiencia de por vida
Se puede aprovechar en minutos
Aunque el lujo de tu vida
Es inalcanzable para cualquier hombre

Así que aprovecha el momento que tienes
Pon todas las lecciones aprendidas en una
Para ser tu mejor yo
¡¡Así que tiene que dejar el mundo cumplida !!


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No words, i just loved it!! Thank you so much for this wonderful and creative work!! It looks great on you and is fun at the same time. Thanks for giving the contest a twist, I love it.

*Definitely, little by little we are filling Hive with positive energy, now we just have to keep doing it to get the good vibe to everyone. Have a beautiful week and I send you a hug from the Dominican Republic!

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Thanks for the kind words. Just glad to make a telling Contribution to the important theme

Music for my eyes hahahahah

¡FABULOSO! me encanta, impresionante que creatividad, tan bien formulado el poema y con mucha coherencia. Estoy de acuerdo contigo, los errores de otros nos da una ventaja de lo que se puede esperar. Jamás aprenderemos de los errores de otros tanto como de los que cometemos nosotros mismos, pero tomar las previsiones ante los errores de otros nos da una ventaja para superarnos a paso firme y constante.

Gracias por sus amables palabras.. Te lo agradezco. Me alegra que leas el significado de mi poema..

Wow! Just wow! I can't believe this.
Very different from every other entry and I must say if this was to be read out, it would fit spoken words so well.
Yea you are right, to remain successful, we must learn from people who failed in one way or the other, this way we will know and be ready to face the storm well prepared and sharpened.
Nice entry and will the best!

Thank you so much. I wish to read your entry too

Impressive! Writing a poem to convey the message of the quote. I'm motivated and filled with energy! 💪

We enjoy a fulfilled life when we learn from other's and our mistakes to be better!

That's just the simple truth. Glad you were I impressed

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