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RE: Leonardo Cassano.

in The Ink Welllast year

A tale of mafia intrigue that sees the protagonist on a mission to bring down the old nasty mafia boss, who turned out to be a good guy, after all. I like the mystery and the detail in crafting this story. The characters are memorable and well defined. I think the story of the half-brother, Andrea, needs a bit more resolution because we don't really know what ends up happening to him. I like how well you crafted the world and characters in this entertaining story.

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Yes, stories related to mafia always get my toe curled up in a very nice way. Thanks for reading and inputing your thoughts on what you think of the characters. Thank you.