This is a suspenseful action story that is like a cross between the Da Vinci Code and Jason Bourne. I think that you use the locales to good effect. I like how the story takes place across multiple locations.
His hunt started from the docks of Lisbon, carefully asking questions in whispers. News spread quickly. The museum heist was classic Leon Veyra - same tools, same methods, even his built was caught on security footage.
The narrative captures the tone of the genre very nicely.
The main character is well developed. I like the fact that he just wants a quite life doing his thing but gets pulled into the heist. Nicely done!
He smiled slightly. His name was cleared in the shadows, and the world would never get to know about it. That was enough.
Thank you very much 🙏