You have such a unique style of writing, and such unique ideas for a story. It's so rich with detail and introspection. Great job π
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You have such a unique style of writing, and such unique ideas for a story. It's so rich with detail and introspection. Great job π
Thank you @littlepiggies
I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and you're right, the nature of the narrative in this short story is highly introspective. I think it suits the close first-person view of the narrator, but also just overall story dynamics with the ambiguity between if the theme park is a real place, a hallucinatory landscape, or a horrific mixture of the two π
Anyway, I won't write an epic 8 paragraph comment like I'm often prone to doing π€£ Like any writer, I just appreciate that people have read and enjoyed the story.
Thanks again π