A poignant exploration of the human condition; I don't have a lot to say - the narrative was quite powerful because of the way you crafted the characters. Well done. The personification of the breeze at the height of the near-battle was my favourite part. A beautiful softness as you were building the tension.
Thank you so much @ lordtimoty, for commenting and reading my story. I'm glad you liked that part you point out, it was very sweet.
Regards