I like how you have given attention to the backstory of the main character, I would like to provide more backstory for Mike, so we would have both points of view and a more balanced story, but I want to respect the community standards, plus I feel it leaves a message of different interpretations as it is, thanks for your support.
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Yes! Very good point, as each person perceives the new information through their current lens of understanding. Each reader has it's own perspective and self-reflective response.
The trick would be to give subtle pointers and leave the rest for the imaginative interpretation of the reader itself.