Hmm a book had to come in to save the dying relationship but I could say Chantelle was putting in her all for it to work... Francis just refused to see it until the book.
Well, I like the fact that you gave it a happy ending... I was already thinking Francis would outburst his feelings in a bad way and everything ends badly.
Nicely written
No, it doesn't need a sad ending, they both need that break as there's already a scar that has been left in them both.
They need to believe in something worthwhile now.
That's a good one
Kudos on this one