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RE: Stories In Letters: Why Do We Shiver At The Edge?

in The Ink Well4 years ago

The juxtaposition of the child's sand castle and the author's desire to build a beautiful castle are striking. The child has a desire to create, destroy and repeat. All for fun. But the author is past the fun. The adventure must have a beautiful and permanent result. I think there is fear that the author worries the pursuit of an adventure may in the end be a regret of leaving a comfortable if mundane present. Also, here from @listnerds

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 4 years ago  

It's overall the lack of a 100% conviction after taking a big step. I am glad this has left an impression on you enough to analyze it.