You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: The Time MachineView the full contextmllg (70)in The Ink Well • 4 years ago Lots of creativity, @amaponian. A well written story that maintains its coherence. I like it
Aun podría haber "pequeñas fisuras de coherencia", pero casi no se notan.
Gracias por comentar.
Me encantó leerte!